Monday 27 September 2021
WALT: Add descriptive features to my Narrative
On the weekend a Time traveler went on a vacation and suddenly both of the engines burst into flames. He heard a big boom! under his feet the plane crash landed on a Tropical island in the storage room where someone was keeping a cheetah and a wild cat. The Time traveler is a 30 year old white man that likes to make new technology. He always wears a black and white suit. Scott is very nice back in America. He was famous for giving things to the homeless. He is very flexible so he can make his eyes and his chin touch his nose. The wild cat has black fur and white eyes. Fluffy has very bad behaviour. His fur is also very fluffy. I think that's why Scott named him that? Scott doesn’t have enough wood to make a boat
The Time traveler mission is to build a boat and leave the island and have two new pets to protect Scott. But the cat ended up attacking Scott. He looked around and saw a little bit of shade and a lot of food but he needed some surplus for the long journey. He saw another tropical island but Scott decided to try to make the cheetah his pet. He tried feeling it by teaching the cheetah and playing with him. He has been on that island for a couple weeks. He whispered to his cheetah and said “ it's time to move to that island. I'm going to name it free land or the land of the surviving i think that this land has lots of food and wood ?” “Lets go swim across the water” said Scott “We can get some fish to” only if you want to come. The cheetah just nodded. Scott just remembered that cats hate water. So he made a little raft that could fit the cheetah. Once they got to the island there was a camp surrounding food, wood, water and weapons. Scott
had an idea the cheetah would detract the worreos and Scott would get the things they need to survive on the survivors island.
Scotts favourite color is red and black and he goes nowhere without his suit case. Scott is trying to get the other people off his island. The solution was to scare the captain and make them go to another one. How would you get the pirates of the island ?
Self assessment.
I improved my writing by.
Writing more
Writing juicy sentences
Finding good words
To improve my writing by.
had an idea the cheetah would detract the worreos and Scott would get the things they need to survive on the survivors island.
Scotts favourite color is red and black and he goes nowhere without his suit case. Scott is trying to get the other people off his island. The solution was to scare the captain and make them go to another one. How would you get the pirates of the island ?
Self assessment.
I improved my writing by.
Writing more
Writing juicy sentences
Finding good words
To improve my writing by.
Write more
Find more juicy words
Write more juicy sentences
Write more
Find more juicy words
Write more juicy sentences
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