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WALT: write a narrative that's amazing
One early morning Scott and Mascot went to the west coast and they met a teenager called chip. Scott is a five unicorn hydra and Mascot is a 20 foot tall wyvern chip is an adult wolf that likes to fight.
Scott cant get something back that got taken from him by someone.
Problem\Solution
Scott mumbled to Mascot,All Mascot heard was let's go he was confused Scott noticed the chip stoll a special diamond from himself. Mascot dashed on to chip and contained both arms and legs intal he was exhaust. Chip was an expert at fighting so he took the diamond and spirited away Scott replied and told him to follow chips footprints. Later that day they found a little hut with lots of diamonds there was a sign that said for theffs they were surrounded by Gigantic sand
Scott is the oldest and Mascot is the youngest Mascot is also stronger than the wolf The wolf is very weak. Scott cant get his diamond back from the theff. Scott called Mascot and whispered in his ear and said “follow chips footprints Mascot”. Do you think they could get the diamond faster ?
Self assessment
Today I improved my writing by
Choosing better words
Writing more than one paragraphs
Writing more descriptive words
To Improve I need to:
Remember to put a simile in
Stop writing boring word sometimes
Stay focused
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