01/06/21 Success criteria I have checked my writing for: 3 simile capital letters, full stops and commas [ groups of three] juicy sentences sentence starters My Dad has a really cool black, short, straight haircut. It looks like he was a rockstar in a band with his electric guitar, my dad has brown eyes,and his smile is like a monkey. When I arrive home from school he always has a big smile on his face and gives me a hug. I remember the time when I Went to Ackland with my dad and I was too scared to go on the huge rollercoaster, fear fall because when you get to the top you drop to the ground. I don't like the roller coaster because there's huge drops and also small fear falls. The jumping castles are the best because you can play tag and bump into each other.
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